tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post5505661852088452955..comments2023-07-18T04:56:49.754-06:00Comments on a gasping little voice: rosequin brownehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09804746948797234402noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-1584526000872531422014-08-24T19:44:22.344-06:002014-08-24T19:44:22.344-06:00Love, love, love this! Love your writing Auntie! E...Love, love, love this! Love your writing Auntie! Excited to have found your blog :)Ranyahttp://ranyawilliams.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-54505432536509260342013-01-06T07:44:14.875-07:002013-01-06T07:44:14.875-07:00and then--i don't know. johny came along, and...and then--i don't know. johny came along, and i hear the voices of other people in the family. this is actually one of my favorite pieces i've ever done. i'm so pleased y'all liked it, too. Quinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-13875544263458768702012-12-31T04:34:36.286-07:002012-12-31T04:34:36.286-07:00and then?
this one begs to be a novel. please!
ma...and then? <br />this one begs to be a novel. please!<br />mail me an id I can add to blogger.austerehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16839224877080864005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-18532294072846623512012-12-21T23:14:25.790-07:002012-12-21T23:14:25.790-07:00I remember this one. I'm glad you allowed an a...I remember this one. I'm glad you allowed an audience to read it. <br />'Bout time you get back to writing, missy. ;)pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-52524105720094823942012-12-21T18:46:59.794-07:002012-12-21T18:46:59.794-07:00I really liked the emdash interjections. Their voi...I really liked the emdash interjections. Their voices are strongly discordant with the main narrative in evocative ways, and give the story a lot more (if sometimes loathsome) texture.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1218270884216778811.post-35642345706876055812012-12-21T08:53:54.908-07:002012-12-21T08:53:54.908-07:00You think I don't read what you write? I love...You think I don't read what you write? I love this one.<br /><br />Just keeping my hand in:<br />Paragraph 5: <br />“their father and me” <br /> comma not semicolon after aberration<br />Paragraph 9:<br />Question mark after bed<br />Question mark after eyes<br /><br />Wish I'd learned to use a whip. 8)"Sorta Mom"http://l-empress.liscious.netnoreply@blogger.com